语法规范
1.不完整的句子
(1)Ifyoufindthatwritingishardisbecauseitishard.Oneofthehardestthingsthatpeopledo.
Ifyoufindthatwritingishardisbecauseitishard—oneofthehardestthingsthatpeopledo.
(2)Stereotypesareakindofgossipabouttheworld.Agossipthatmakesusprejudgepeoplebeforeweeverlayeyesonthem.
Stereotypesareakindofgossipabouttheworld,agossipthatmakesusprejudgepeoplebeforeweeverlayeyesonthem.
Stereotypesareakindofgossipabouttheworldthatmakesusprejudgepeoplebeforeweeverlayeyesonthem.
2.分词短语作状语的错误
Holdingherinhisarms,themoonhidbehindthecloud.
Assoonasthemoonhidbehindthecloud,heheldherinhisarms.
3.修饰词错位
(1)RomeoreceivedwordthatJulietwasdeadfromanothermessenger.
RomeoreceivedwordfromanothermessengerthatJulietwasdead.
(2)Afterleavingthestage,theaudience’sapplausecalledthemusiciansbackforanencore.
Afterthemusiciansleftthestage,theaudience’sapplausecalledthembackforanencore.
(3)Disruptiveintheclassroom,ateachermaybeexasperatedwithhyperactivechildren.
Disruptiveintheclassroom,hyperactivechildrenmayexasperateateacher.
4.串句
Unproductiveoruncooperativeworkerscanseriouslyharmanorganization,forthisreason,employersneedtohaveaccurateinformationaboutemployeeperformance,butwhenemployeeshavefullaccesstotheirownpersonnelfiles,co-workersandevensupervisorswilloftenfinditdifficulttogivefrankcriticismofunderachieversortoreporttroublemakers.
Unproductiveoruncooperativeworkerscanseriouslyharmanorganization;forthisreason,employersneedtohaveaccurateinformationaboutemployeeperformance.Butwhenemployeeshavefullaccesstotheirownpersonnelfiles,co-workersandevensupervisorswilloftenfinditdifficulttogivefrankcriticismofunderachieversortoreporttroublemakers.
5.时态错误
Theresearchersadmittedthattheyfalsifiedcrucialdatainthestudy.
Theresearchersadmittedthattheyhadfalsifiedcrucialdatainthestudy.
6.代词错误
(1)Toooftenpeopleeitherkeeptheirfeelingstothemselvesortakeitouronothers.
Toooftenpeopleeitherkeeptheirfeelingstothemselvesortakethemouronothers.
(2)Eachgirlandboymustdotheirparttokeepthehomefiresburning.
Eachgirlandboymustdoherorhisparttokeepthehomefiresburning.
(3)Thiscollegehastheirownentrancerequirements.
Thiscollegehasitsownentrancerequirements.
(4)Ifonewishestoparticipateinthepoliticalprocess,youcanbeginbyvotingregularly.
Ifonewishestoparticipateinthepoliticalprocess,onecanbeginbyvotingregularly.
(5)Thefireinthelibrarywasfinallyputout.Forawhile,theythoughtanunhappyemployeemighthavestartedit.
Thefireinthelibrarywasfinallyputout.Forawhile,thelibrarystaffthoughtanunhappyemployeemighthavestartedit.
7.结构混乱
BecauseHemingway’sstyleissimplemakeshiswritingaccessibletoallreaders.
BecauseHemingway’sstyleissimple,hiswritingisaccessibletoallreaders.
Hemingway’ssimplestylemakeshiswritingaccessibletoallreaders.
