托福写作有时很容易：20分钟可以学会三种句型的运用。托福写作有时也很难，难点在于怎样用地道英文表达?托福培训带你走进地道英语的世界，一起来看如何写出地道的托福英语。
例子：
1.Theartist'sworkpushesourcivilizationtoahigherlevel.
改进：Artists'workupgradesourcivilization.
2.Forexample,youworkinabigfactory.
改进:Supposeyouworkinabigfactory.
3.You'llfindyouarefitforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourmainjob.
改进：You'llfindthatyouarecutoutforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourcareer.
4.Wewillownnothingatallifwedependonluck.
改进:Wewillgetnowhereifwerelyonluck.
5.Hewillgetahighersalarytoimprovehislivinglevel.
改进:Hewillgetahighersalary,thusimprovinghislife.
6.Theirbrainisstillveryyoung.
改进:Theyarestillimmature.
7.Dissatisfactionmakespeopleproducedesireforbetterthings.
改进:Dissatisfactionimpelspeopleforthebetter.
8.Theycan'tanalyzeclearlywhatisrightandwhatiswrong.
改进:Theycannottellrightfromwrong.
9.Itwillhelpchildrentoformagoodhabitofdealingwithtime.
改进:Itwillhelpchildrenlearntomakegooduseoftime.
10.Thoughitisnotthebestjob,itaffordtohislife.
改进:Thoughitisnotthebestjob,ajobisajob.Hecanmakeendsmeetwithit.
以上是考生们在托福写作中经常出现的中国式英语经过修改后的地道英语的对比，从中找出不同来知道地道英语到底怎么写的，从而运用到托福写作中。
