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雅思写作想取得高分，靠都是实力，没有别的办法，有了扎实的基础，在掌握足够的雅思技巧，取得理想分数就不是问题了。雅思写作考试小编为大家整理了高分句式，希望能帮助大家。

雅思写作高分句式表达要点一：避免使用语意弱的“be”动词

1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：

Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.

Revision:Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(转换为前置定语)

Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.(转换为并列结构作后置定语)

2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。

例如：

1)Weak:Theteammembersaregoodplayers.

Revision:Theteammembersplaywell.

2)Weak:Oneworker'splanistheeliminationoftardiness.

Revision:Oneworker'splaneliminatestardiness.

3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。

例如：

1)Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.

Revision:Noopportunityforpromotionexists.

2)Weak:Herearethebooksyouordered.

Revision:Thebooksyouorderedhavearrived.

雅思写作高分句式表达要点二：多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了

例如：

1、Poor:Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk.

Better:Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.

2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.

Better:Sheparespricesandquality.

雅思写作高分句式表达要点三：尽量运用主动语态

例如：

1、Weak:Theorganizationhasbeensupportedbycharity.

Better:Charityhassupportedtheorganization.

2、Weak:Thebiscuitswerestackedonaplate.

Better:Motherstackedthebiscuitsonaplate.

雅思写作高分句式表达要点四：防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语

例如：

1、Wordy:Mylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolatemilk.

Improved:Mylittlesisterpreferschocolatemilk.

2、Wordy:Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyourrmendations.

Improved:Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyourrmendation.

3、Redundant:Wehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.

Improved:Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.

4、Redundant:MysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldressindifferentstores.

Improved:MysisterandIboughtthesamedressindifferentstores.

雅思写作高分句式表达要点五：杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

例如：

1、Weak:Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.

Improved:Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.

2、Weak:IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateourexpendituresnextfall.

Improved:IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateourexpendituresnextfall.