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雅思写作想取得高分,靠都是实力,没有别的办法,有了扎实的基础,在掌握足够的雅思技巧,取得理想分数就不是问题了。雅思写作考试小编为大家整理了高分句式,希望能帮助大家。
雅思写作高分句式表达要点一:避免使用语意弱的“be”动词
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:
Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.
Revision:Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(转换为前置定语)
Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.(转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。
例如:
1)Weak:Theteammembersaregoodplayers.
Revision:Theteammembersplaywell.
2)Weak:Oneworker'splanistheeliminationoftardiness.
Revision:Oneworker'splaneliminatestardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。
例如:
1)Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.
Revision:Noopportunityforpromotionexists.
2)Weak:Herearethebooksyouordered.
Revision:Thebooksyouorderedhavearrived.
雅思写作高分句式表达要点二:多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了
例如:
1、Poor:Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk.
Better:Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.
2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.
Better:Sheparespricesandquality.
雅思写作高分句式表达要点三:尽量运用主动语态
例如:
1、Weak:Theorganizationhasbeensupportedbycharity.
Better:Charityhassupportedtheorganization.
2、Weak:Thebiscuitswerestackedonaplate.
Better:Motherstackedthebiscuitsonaplate.
雅思写作高分句式表达要点四:防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语
例如:
1、Wordy:Mylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolatemilk.
Improved:Mylittlesisterpreferschocolatemilk.
2、Wordy:Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyourrmendations.
Improved:Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyourrmendation.
3、Redundant:Wehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.
Improved:Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.
4、Redundant:MysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldressindifferentstores.
Improved:MysisterandIboughtthesamedressindifferentstores.
雅思写作高分句式表达要点五:杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语
例如:
1、Weak:Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.
Improved:Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.
2、Weak:IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateourexpendituresnextfall.
Improved:IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateourexpendituresnextfall.
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